Comments on: Timeline http://www.poemsblog.com/timeline/ Poetry of Rob Radcliffe Tue, 06 Jan 2009 08:32:43 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.5 By: Rob http://www.poemsblog.com/timeline/#comment-14632 Rob Tue, 19 Feb 2008 10:03:01 +0000 http://www.poemsblog.com/timeline/#comment-14632 Interesting little poem that, sounds quite sinister with the demons and lost souls - have seen it knocking around a few places on the net - anyone know the author or anything about them? Interesting little poem that, sounds quite sinister with the demons and lost souls - have seen it knocking around a few places on the net - anyone know the author or anything about them?

]]> By: ryan http://www.poemsblog.com/timeline/#comment-14629 ryan Tue, 19 Feb 2008 09:55:01 +0000 http://www.poemsblog.com/timeline/#comment-14629 I am left here to die. Making my way up the path, Recapturing my life, My heart, The fragments of my once reality Then come the demons: they take me away, they remind me of my pain, they rip at my dead heart, feeding on my soul, taking all that's left. But still I walk this path, shattering my dreams, the hands that once guided me have gone, yet, still I stand, walking this lonely path, all alone, fighting the demons, living my illusions, looking for the guardian, that had my soul..... I am left here to die.
Making my way up the path,
Recapturing my life,
My heart,
The fragments of my once reality
Then come the demons:
they take me away,
they remind me of my pain,
they rip at my dead heart,
feeding on my soul,
taking all that’s left.
But still I walk this path,
shattering my dreams,
the hands that once guided me have gone,
yet, still I stand,
walking this lonely path,
all alone,
fighting the demons,
living my illusions,
looking for the guardian,
that had my soul…..

]]> By: Rob http://www.poemsblog.com/timeline/#comment-13456 Rob Sat, 02 Feb 2008 17:30:13 +0000 http://www.poemsblog.com/timeline/#comment-13456 Sure, that would be a great idea - have always wanted to do something like that, just never met the right musician :) Would be happy to publish the results here on the site :) Sure, that would be a great idea - have always wanted to do something like that, just never met the right musician :)

Would be happy to publish the results here on the site :)

]]> By: Lou http://www.poemsblog.com/timeline/#comment-13455 Lou Sat, 02 Feb 2008 17:02:59 +0000 http://www.poemsblog.com/timeline/#comment-13455 Mr Radcliffe, I found ''by accident'' your blog and poems, and really appreciate them. I was wondering if eventually you would be open to have them ( like Timeline or Strangers) compose with music? I have a friend, which is a musician, and as I know him, he would appreciate and be inspired by your words. No, he doesn't have any billions, but he is very rich of sensibility and skill, as well as you seem too. Thank you for your reply! Lou Mr Radcliffe,

I found ”by accident” your blog and poems, and really appreciate them. I was wondering if eventually you would be open to have them ( like Timeline or Strangers) compose with music?
I have a friend, which is a musician, and as I know him, he would appreciate and be inspired by your words. No, he doesn’t have any billions, but he is very rich of sensibility and skill, as well as you seem too.

Thank you for your reply!
Lou

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