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	<description>Poetry of Rob Radcliffe</description>
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		<title>By: Topical Poet</title>
		<link>http://www.poemsblog.com/last-post/comment-page-1/#comment-70843</link>
		<dc:creator>Topical Poet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Nov 2009 16:49:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Rob,

I wanted to email you but couldn&#039;t find an address on your site. I just wanted to let you know that everyone admired your poem at the funeral and said how nice it was to have something different from the norm.  My brother, especially, found it very moving.

I have started writing again but only seem to have inspiration for the one topic - Dad.  Guess it&#039;s early days! Here are a couple of my latest efforts. I have a long way to go to match your standards. I wish there was a poetry group near me.

 Hope you are keeping well and the writing is flowing. 

Regards
Lesley

lesleysmithson@yahoo.co.uk

Wish You Were There
-------------------------------

When I was small, it seemed to me,
That if I fell and scraped my knee,
I&#039;d need someone to carry me,
You were always there.

From you, I learned that I could be,
Whatever I desired to be,
I knew that you believed in me,
You were always there.

And when I reached maturity,
You came to mean much more to me,
My friend and father, equally,
You were always there. 

In time, you slowed down physically,
And sometimes you relied on me,
But that&#039;s the way that it should be,
You were always there.

Although it did occur to me,
One day, you&#039;d not be there for me,
I hid from the reality,
You were always there.

I rang, you didn&#039;t answer me,
I hurried to your side to see,
You sitting just where you should be,
But you weren&#039;t really there.

You&#039;d gone, you had abandoned me,
I miss your presence constantly,
And words can never comfort me,
Now you&#039;re no longer there.


Meeting the Big Boss
------------------------------

Sorry you&#039;d to come at such short notice,
You&#039;re tired, I see, so I won&#039;t keep you long,
Time for me to ease your years of service,
To make you work so hard for me was wrong.
Muscles groan and ache from growing older,
The mind wears down from trouble, stress and strife,
Take my hand, it&#039;s time to let me shoulder,
The heavy burden of your daily life.
For you, at last, deserve to be relieved,
Of all the pain that living life can cause,
Alas, your loved ones have to be bereaved,
It&#039;s sad, but one of life&#039;s eternal laws.
I&#039;ve come to welcome you and vow to bring you ease,
Step into my Kingdom, where you&#039;ll find love and peace.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Rob,</p>
<p>I wanted to email you but couldn&#8217;t find an address on your site. I just wanted to let you know that everyone admired your poem at the funeral and said how nice it was to have something different from the norm.  My brother, especially, found it very moving.</p>
<p>I have started writing again but only seem to have inspiration for the one topic &#8211; Dad.  Guess it&#8217;s early days! Here are a couple of my latest efforts. I have a long way to go to match your standards. I wish there was a poetry group near me.</p>
<p> Hope you are keeping well and the writing is flowing. </p>
<p>Regards<br />
Lesley</p>
<p><a href="mailto:lesleysmithson@yahoo.co.uk">lesleysmithson@yahoo.co.uk</a></p>
<p>Wish You Were There<br />
&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;-</p>
<p>When I was small, it seemed to me,<br />
That if I fell and scraped my knee,<br />
I&#8217;d need someone to carry me,<br />
You were always there.</p>
<p>From you, I learned that I could be,<br />
Whatever I desired to be,<br />
I knew that you believed in me,<br />
You were always there.</p>
<p>And when I reached maturity,<br />
You came to mean much more to me,<br />
My friend and father, equally,<br />
You were always there. </p>
<p>In time, you slowed down physically,<br />
And sometimes you relied on me,<br />
But that&#8217;s the way that it should be,<br />
You were always there.</p>
<p>Although it did occur to me,<br />
One day, you&#8217;d not be there for me,<br />
I hid from the reality,<br />
You were always there.</p>
<p>I rang, you didn&#8217;t answer me,<br />
I hurried to your side to see,<br />
You sitting just where you should be,<br />
But you weren&#8217;t really there.</p>
<p>You&#8217;d gone, you had abandoned me,<br />
I miss your presence constantly,<br />
And words can never comfort me,<br />
Now you&#8217;re no longer there.</p>
<p>Meeting the Big Boss<br />
&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;</p>
<p>Sorry you&#8217;d to come at such short notice,<br />
You&#8217;re tired, I see, so I won&#8217;t keep you long,<br />
Time for me to ease your years of service,<br />
To make you work so hard for me was wrong.<br />
Muscles groan and ache from growing older,<br />
The mind wears down from trouble, stress and strife,<br />
Take my hand, it&#8217;s time to let me shoulder,<br />
The heavy burden of your daily life.<br />
For you, at last, deserve to be relieved,<br />
Of all the pain that living life can cause,<br />
Alas, your loved ones have to be bereaved,<br />
It&#8217;s sad, but one of life&#8217;s eternal laws.<br />
I&#8217;ve come to welcome you and vow to bring you ease,<br />
Step into my Kingdom, where you&#8217;ll find love and peace.</p>
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		<title>By: Rob</title>
		<link>http://www.poemsblog.com/last-post/comment-page-1/#comment-57841</link>
		<dc:creator>Rob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Jun 2009 10:04:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am sorry to hear that Lesley, feel free to borrow the poem.

I still haven&#039;t updated the site - too much happening, I might try to post the poems I used for funerals later as someone said they were a nice alternative from the stock ones some people use.

My thoughts are with you at this hard time for you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am sorry to hear that Lesley, feel free to borrow the poem.</p>
<p>I still haven&#8217;t updated the site &#8211; too much happening, I might try to post the poems I used for funerals later as someone said they were a nice alternative from the stock ones some people use.</p>
<p>My thoughts are with you at this hard time for you.</p>
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		<title>By: Topical Poet</title>
		<link>http://www.poemsblog.com/last-post/comment-page-1/#comment-57774</link>
		<dc:creator>Topical Poet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Jun 2009 21:40:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Rob,

Yesterday,  I lost my father. My brother and I found him together on his sofa and I remembered your poem. It says everything I feel and would want to say. Would you let me borrow it please? Of course I will understand if you would rather I didn&#039;t. I probably shouldn&#039;t ask.

Wishing you well. Lesley</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rob,</p>
<p>Yesterday,  I lost my father. My brother and I found him together on his sofa and I remembered your poem. It says everything I feel and would want to say. Would you let me borrow it please? Of course I will understand if you would rather I didn&#8217;t. I probably shouldn&#8217;t ask.</p>
<p>Wishing you well. Lesley</p>
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		<title>By: Rob</title>
		<link>http://www.poemsblog.com/last-post/comment-page-1/#comment-55641</link>
		<dc:creator>Rob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 16:37:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the comments - I&#039;ve been very busy as my mother died last month, she&#039;d been ill for sometime - hence I haven&#039;t had much time to moderate comments or even update, but these comments have inspired me to make a bit of an effort now, thanks.

Rob</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the comments &#8211; I&#8217;ve been very busy as my mother died last month, she&#8217;d been ill for sometime &#8211; hence I haven&#8217;t had much time to moderate comments or even update, but these comments have inspired me to make a bit of an effort now, thanks.</p>
<p>Rob</p>
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		<title>By: Topical Poet</title>
		<link>http://www.poemsblog.com/last-post/comment-page-1/#comment-55637</link>
		<dc:creator>Topical Poet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 15:27:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As the daughter of an 87 year old I am trying to prepare myself for the inevitable loss of my father and knowing I never can, you have my empathy. In this poem your sense of loss is palpable and it brought tears to my eyes.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As the daughter of an 87 year old I am trying to prepare myself for the inevitable loss of my father and knowing I never can, you have my empathy. In this poem your sense of loss is palpable and it brought tears to my eyes.</p>
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		<title>By: Antwan Little</title>
		<link>http://www.poemsblog.com/last-post/comment-page-1/#comment-49734</link>
		<dc:creator>Antwan Little</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Mar 2009 05:24:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you for that great, deep, and powerful poem. I really love your style... i wish that there is a chance for us to bounce poetic ideas off each other in the future. I want the opinion of a  fellow poet so could you check out my poetry and tell me what you think:

http://majesticlure.blogspot.com/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for that great, deep, and powerful poem. I really love your style&#8230; i wish that there is a chance for us to bounce poetic ideas off each other in the future. I want the opinion of a  fellow poet so could you check out my poetry and tell me what you think:</p>
<p><a href="http://majesticlure.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">http://majesticlure.blogspot.com/</a></p>
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		<title>By: Sari</title>
		<link>http://www.poemsblog.com/last-post/comment-page-1/#comment-47819</link>
		<dc:creator>Sari</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Mar 2009 12:59:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>you must have been given positive feedback about last post by now, its great.  I shall read more of your work and maybe even take a bit more notice of contemporary poetry.  I love &#039;undistance&#039;.  I love the way the timelessness of grave moments is captured, and yet also how at that moment one is minutely aware of self and time and space.

I came across you looking for a twentieth century Welsh poet, I&#039;m guessing a male, who wrote a poem about stumbling about drunk and pinching a police woman&#039;s bottom, in the style of Dylan Thomas, any ideas?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>you must have been given positive feedback about last post by now, its great.  I shall read more of your work and maybe even take a bit more notice of contemporary poetry.  I love &#8216;undistance&#8217;.  I love the way the timelessness of grave moments is captured, and yet also how at that moment one is minutely aware of self and time and space.</p>
<p>I came across you looking for a twentieth century Welsh poet, I&#8217;m guessing a male, who wrote a poem about stumbling about drunk and pinching a police woman&#8217;s bottom, in the style of Dylan Thomas, any ideas?</p>
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